I did not enjoy the first day although I could relate to it. The story brought me back to my childhood years and reminded me about all my first days of school down to my last first day in high school. The story was interesting to read about, but it also was boring. In the end, I was a little confused as to why they ended the story that way.
The Cooling House was much better in my opinion. It was funny and enjoyable. I was a little lost on some parts but then I caught back up to speed and understood what was going on. I believe the poem was from the air conditions point of view. If it was, the author did a great job of displaying its feelings towards the grandmother in the story.
I enjoyed reading your story. I am little confused of who the character you wrote about. You did a great job.
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